Readers, including candidates, who question my use of the word “said” in the story about second-day election results have reason to do so.
When the new election numbers came in on Wednesday, I called both Bremerton mayor candidates, Bremerton City Councilman Will Maupin and former county commissioner Patty Lent, to get their reactions.
In my conversation with Maupin I asked his reaction to the second-day numbers, which showed he had lost ground, and what he would do now.
Maupin answered that he had no idea, that it was too early to figure that out. “I’m very concerned about the city of Bremerton. I don’t think we’re headed in a good direction,” he said. “I will try to figure out what to do
to best serve the city.”
Before I heard that comment I had no inclination to think that Maupin might consider leaving his seat. But that comment made me wonder if that was what he was thinking about. So I asked him specifically if “try to figure out what to do to best serve the city” meant he was considering resigning.
He did not say, “Yes.” He did not say, “No.” He did say he had to think about what to do — that it was “way too early” to be talking about what’s next.
I didn’t want to write a story saying that Maupin was open to resigning from his council seat unless I was certain he was really was open to it. So I asked him again. I received the same answer. In response to one of those questions, he said, “At the moment I don’t feel good about working with the person who appears to have been elected our new mayor.”
In neither case did he deny that he was open to resigning. My error was in writing that Maupin “said” he was considering resigning. He did not specifically “say” that.
I inferred from his comments, which were made in response to two specific questions about a possible resignation, that he was considering it and in the story wrote that he “said” it.
Had I written that “he didn’t rule out resigning,” or something akin to that, I wouldn’t feel a need to count this as a mistake. My inference may have been incorrect, but given two opportunities to be clear about that with me, Maupin wouldn’t deny that resignation was one of the possibilities.
The problem, to repeat an earlier point, was in the improper use of “said,” because he didn’t say it.
Even when we paraphrase someone instead of quoting them, “said” should mean what it says, that he said it. He didn’t. He implied it, maybe. He didn’t rule it out. He made it seem like a real possibility. But he didn’t say it.
I was incorrect in writing that he did.
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